I circled back and reread this in preparation for the final results this week. I'm glad I did, your piece really works well in breaking down the consitutent parts of the business process, then reassembling them.
I picked up a lot more detail the second time, as well as getting a better handle on the overall framework.
If it seems I'm saying there were any problems first time round, rest assured they belonged to this reader, not the author!
I circled back and reread this in preparation for the final results this week. I'm glad I did, your piece really works well in breaking down the consitutent parts of the business process, then reassembling them.
I picked up a lot more detail the second time, as well as getting a better handle on the overall framework.
If it seems I'm saying there were any problems first time round, rest assured they belonged to this reader, not the author!